Any Tips ?

Hi ! So I made a video from the speech from Rocky Balboa and I was wondering if anyone has some tips for me because this is my first time posting a video in here and my first video that i made like this. Thanks !
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Stargazer54 Moderator Moderator, Website User, Ambassador, HitFilm Beta Tester Posts: 3,087 Ambassador
I liked it! That's a good speech.
My $0.02 - You've got a flash frame at 0:11:15. Not sure that was intentional but that signals the upcoming fade in of the earth crescent that immediately follows. I would take out the flash frame. But the fade in of the crescent is very nicely done.
You've got another flash frame to nothing at 0:37:14. I would fix that.
The outgoing pic shifts during the fade completion at about 39 sec. I would let that pic keep panning to the end of the fade.
Pretty long time in black at 1:12:00 to 1:21:00. Might need another visual, but understand trying to maximize the impact of the text at 1:22:00.
All in all very effective. Nice work!
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Thank You ! Will take note for next video
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That was my favorite part in the movie. Nicely done. I agree with everything Stargazer54 said with the exception of too much black at 1:12 to 1:21 for me, it added tension and anticipation.