DafterThingsDafterThings Website User Posts: 878 Enthusiast

Took a LONG time to put together...

... and couldn't decide the better ending.


  • FlyingBanana78FlyingBanana78 Website User Posts: 419 Enthusiast

    Hahaha, Great work, liked the story and as far as ending I feel this ending was better as it draws the viewer into a nice heartfelt moment then you start to realize what is possibly happening and then wonder which is going to do the deed at the end. Your story and quality improves with each video you do, love it and keep it up!

  • tddavistddavis Moderator, Website User Posts: 4,177 Moderator

    @DafterThings I liked the alternate ending more but the first ending does stick with you more so I'm really torn.  Good work as always though.

  • DafterThingsDafterThings Website User Posts: 878 Enthusiast
    edited December 2019

    Thanks both.
    Usually I am not a fan of alternate endings. I'd rather be told the story the writer intended.... BUT....
    I really liked how the different ending changed the whole context of the story.
    I've never written a love story (of sorts) before so it was interesting to see what I could do in a few minutes.
    Once it had changed from a "Hero & Henchman meet and have adventures" into a one off then it was always going to be a tragedy.

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