Paralysis | Sleep Paralysis Horror Short Film

ZacharyY
ZacharyY Website User Posts: 3 Just Starting Out
edited October 2019 in Show off

Hi all,

This is a short film I made using Hitfilm pro. I would love to hear all of your feedback on it.

Comments

  • tddavis
    tddavis Moderator, Website User Posts: 4,524 Moderator

    @ZacharyY Very interesting.  The build of the music really amped up the tension for me, and the lighting was well done.

  • DafterThings
    DafterThings Website User Posts: 922 Enthusiast
    edited October 2019

    I agree with the music creating tensions and the lighting. I liked the tight framing of some of the shots as well.
    I might have used the door knob rattling a little more sparingly and, perhaps, make it quieter. The same with the footsteps. Might be a personal thing but I find occasional, half-heard noises creepier than louder ones.

    Maybe a single tear falls down her face right at the end as she realises how helpless she is?

  • TxH003
    TxH003 Website User Posts: 37 Just Starting Out

    Overall, nice job.  Solid music and visuals.  I do prefer less camera movement, but that is more of a personal choice.  

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