This is a short film I made using Hitfilm pro. I would love to hear all of your feedback on it.
@ZacharyY Very interesting. The build of the music really amped up the tension for me, and the lighting was well done.
I agree with the music creating tensions and the lighting. I liked the tight framing of some of the shots as well.I might have used the door knob rattling a little more sparingly and, perhaps, make it quieter. The same with the footsteps. Might be a personal thing but I find occasional, half-heard noises creepier than louder ones.
Maybe a single tear falls down her face right at the end as she realises how helpless she is?
Overall, nice job. Solid music and visuals. I do prefer less camera movement, but that is more of a personal choice.
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