Would someone like to review a script (fourth draft in last post)?
Disclaimer: I'm a telecom engineer working as a manager in a software company, so this is strictly amateur and for fun.
Some of you might have checked out "Just waiting for Friday", the last 'movie/short' we did for our Peer Awards event (you can find it in "work gallery" subforum).
This time around (not knowing for sure if I'll be working on the movie or not) I went ahead and wrote three different treatments (I use the term loosely here...) before I fully dive into the script writing. The idea is that we'd have some options, and by involving people in the choice, getting them more committed (change management 101).
Anyway, would anyone around here like to read them and give feedback? It's 2 pages each (including character description and the story itself in prose).
The final product will be a 15ish minute "film".
Just let me know