Hey--my first post in the user gallery. I'd love some feedback from this! I'll add a second version in the future.
Ok not bad for a first post, you have the basics starting there. Some tips to make it look more like WatchDogs (not a game I have played but seen the trailers). Not sure if that is you in the video, but if so why not put your camera on a tripod and film yourself walking towards is down a street or something. Then using the Hitfilm TRACK take your head and make the text and tracker box appear around you linked to the tracking point. Make your font smaller to make it look better. Another option is use a free video clip of a crowed of people and do the same effect on them.
@Andy001z - Thanks. I'll post a second version soon.
I don't know Watch Dogs, so I don't know how your version compares to that, but, from a general design and storytelling standpoint, what you have so far works.
I laughed at "Occupation: ERROR."
Here's the second version!
I forgot to leave the alarm in the end. Oops
That is really startling. I don't know quite what to say about it, except that it's very unsettling in a strange way.
i like it
That's getting better! Well done!
FWIW, I think OCCUPATION: ERROR is funnier than OCCUPATION: NO RECORD.
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