Short Action Comedy - Production Value

mdubs
mdubs Website User Posts: 1

Made this with a Canon C100, Ronin-M, and 30mm Sigma lens. Probably would have been less shaky if I used a 20mm lens and no HDMI cable sticking out of the camera. Feedback would be great. Thanks!

 

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  • Kadri
    Kadri Website User Posts: 168 Just Starting Out*
    edited August 2016

    I like it. The acting is better then i expected. I don't know them but they have potential really.

    I can see why you ended it in that way. But you could have cut it direct after the ufo too. Subjective.

    Nice work :)

  • TriFlixFilms
    TriFlixFilms Website User Posts: 924 Just Starting Out*

    That's hilarious! 

  • Andy001z
    Andy001z Moderator, Website User, Ambassador, Imerge Beta Tester, HitFilm Beta Tester Posts: 3,112 Ambassador

    This is very good, made me laugh, that said you might need to be inside the whole production business to get the joke. When all said and done, it is a solid video, great acting (hope that pizza was loaded!!) and a great script. It certainly made me click on the channel to find out what else you guys have done.

    Thanks for sharing  @mdubs

  • Triem23
    Triem23 Moderator Moderator, Website User, Ambassador, Imerge Beta Tester, HitFilm Beta Tester Posts: 19,816 Ambassador

    It could have been worse. The producer could have insisted on a jib shot--or worse, a drone.

    Great job!

  • KirstieT
    KirstieT Staff Administrator, Moderator, Website User, Imerge Beta Tester, HitFilm Beta Tester Posts: 1,085 Staff
    edited August 2016

    @mdubs - you know what, that's one of my favourite things I've seen in a while :) The jokes were on point, the acting was good, the terrible special effect was suitably terrible and I REALLY liked it. 
    I was constantly flinching for your cameraman with the steady cam though - I kept picturing them falling off the concrete either side. 

    Struck me as a spoof version of the roof scene from this Film Riot short (except they shot it with a Phantom drone): 

  • spydurhank
    spydurhank Website User, Imerge Beta Tester, HitFilm Beta Tester Posts: 3,149 Expert

    Love it... freakin' hilarious!!! ;)

  • [Deleted User]
    [Deleted User] Posts: 1,995 Just Starting Out

    Hahahahahahahahahaha, this is great!

  • CowboyBob
    CowboyBob Website User Posts: 105 Just Starting Out*

    Great! Surprisingly well acted.

  • spydurhank
    spydurhank Website User, Imerge Beta Tester, HitFilm Beta Tester Posts: 3,149 Expert
  • Andy001z
    Andy001z Moderator, Website User, Ambassador, Imerge Beta Tester, HitFilm Beta Tester Posts: 3,112 Ambassador

    Watched it again after seeing it bump on the forum list and still pretty funny, mind you now what bugs me is the lighting change from clearly day light to a night shot. Guess they ran out of daylight.