just want some feedback before i drop my video

hey guys Im like really new to video editing. ive gotten into it because of my other passion - drift triking. well im working on a BIG project for me and my friends and i would just like some points of view from someone looking at it from and editing aspect rather than from the point of view of those on the screen.  this project is not finished i am waiting to get more footage from friends. but let me know what you think about what i have so far