Advice?

JoshuaBaldassarre
Website User Posts: 45
Hello all,
I recently read @TriFlixFilms discussion on Intro Advice, and it reminded me that I have an unfinished work in progress intro that I didn't know what to do with!
This discussion was also inspired by @Triem23 's main discussion.
My final render of the video below will be in 2.5k, for all those high-res mad people out there (I know, not 4k , it's too much for my laptop). Current render is in 720p for speed of sharing and previewing.
https://www.youtube.com/embed/MlA9yEiC-Pc
I was wondering if I could receive feedback on how to improve this. I will repost every time I have a somewhat finished version based on feedback and my own aims.
Works in progress:
- Title(duh)
- More interesting mid-ground movement apart form 2 circles
Considerations:
- (Only one I could think of) A complete redesign.
Thanks