Advice?

JoshuaBaldassarre

Hello all,

I recently read @TriFlixFilms discussion on Intro Advice, and it reminded me that I have an unfinished work in progress intro that I didn't know what to do with!

This discussion was also inspired by @Triem23 's main discussion.

My final render of the video below will be in 2.5k, for all those high-res mad people out there (I know, not 4k , it's too much for my laptop). Current render is in 720p for speed of sharing and previewing.

https://www.youtube.com/embed/MlA9yEiC-Pc

I was wondering if I could receive feedback on how to improve this. I will repost every time I have a somewhat finished version based on feedback and my own aims.

Works in progress:

• Title(duh)
• More interesting mid-ground movement apart form 2 circles

Considerations:

• (Only one I could think of) A complete redesign.

Thanks