Working on an intro using atomic particles! Please leave criticism.

Philentemovies

Thanks for watching! Please leave some helpful criticism!

Silentwisher

I really liked the intro. I cant really criticize anything. I like it a lot. Good job!

Philentemovies

thanks!

Thelurkerish

looks really good to me cant think of anyway of improving it

SimonKJones

Main thing I'm not sure about is the flickering at the start. Having the flickering, wobbly focus and the animated letter feels like too much and my eyes aren't sure what to look at. I'd suggest taking out the flickering and just keeping the focus pull and animated letters.

HMF

I quite like it, but I think maybe it´s all going a bit too fast - it was over before I really grasped it. I don´t like intros that last some fatiguing 30 seconds, but I think something about 8 seconds might suit your intro better. In addition, it could use some sound effects, maybe just some slowly evolving dark noise at the beginning and then something to underline the shattering of the text.