Short film - How to tell I love her

Nuwanda

Hi there, just finished my 1st short using Hitfilm.

Note: No lightsabers, guns & explosions inside.
Every comment is appreciated ...

Thelurkerish

I really enjoyed it. I think the combination of visuals and music really caught that moment in a relationship where you want to take it to another level but worry about the consequances of possibly loseing a friend
I think the choice of music was perfect and it was just the right length
while im always uneasy critiquing things given, the sum total of my film making has been making plastic models blow each other up, I wonder the final film could be graded a bit diffently to make it slightly more atmospheric. Maybe even a slight vigenette

mercianfilm

Powerful stuff Nuwanda! I liked the idea of the words floating about outside his head and them coming out the rhyming dictionary. I also loved some of the final shots- After all the frustration and concentration to find the right thing to say it's always easier just to say those 3 words. They're powerful enough.
I liked this a lot , great work!:D
Sam

Robin

No lightsabers, guns or explosions??? Nooooooo...
Just kidding. Stunning work you did here, really loved it!

paradad2303

awww, thats so sweet! :wub: i loved it! i like the way the text comes out of the dictionary, then fades onto the diary.

Nuwanda

Hey - thank's for your kind replies B-)